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    dots Submission Name: To A Loving Mother dots
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    Author: Bones
    ASL Info:    40/M/ALABAMA
    Elite Ratio:    2.75 - 11/10/18
    Words: 170
    Class/Type: Poetry/What you did
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       this is a poem to my step mom


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    dotsTo A Loving Mother dots
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    As a child of Ten,


    You took me in as your Own.


    You gave me your Love,


    As if I were your Own.


    You showed me Love,


    I had never known from my Own.


    We have had our good times and Bad,


    But your love has never Failed.


    The greatest love is of Mother and Child,


    But giving birth does not make you a Mother.


    The love you give a Child,


    Is what makes you a Mother.


    I give you my love, Geneva, My Mom,


    And hope I make you Happy.


    You fill my life with Love,


    I would have never Known,


    If I had not known You.




    Written by: William D Thompson JR




    Submitted on 2007-03-13 13:01:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is really sweet. I hope you gave her a copy.
    | Posted on 2007-03-14 00:00:00 | by joeyalphabet | [ Reply to This ]
      Remarkable write about a step mother. It is amazing that a step mother has blossomed your life with love and looks like your life is fragrant with her love. I pay my tribute to such a great woman.
    | Posted on 2007-03-13 00:00:00 | by Ramneet | [ Reply to This ]
      Remarkable write about a step mother. It is amazing that a step mother has blossomed your life with love and looks like your life is fragrant with her love. I pay my tribute to such a great woman.
    | Posted on 2007-03-13 00:00:00 | by Ramneet | [ Reply to This ]
      Aww thats so cute, I bet she's so proud. I love the flow of this poem.I just think this peom is so nice.but maybe im biased cause my ex is adopted
    | Posted on 2007-03-13 00:00:00 | by Rainin_Raspbery | [ Reply to This ]


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