Description: This is about a loved one that I lost. I miss him.
March 9, 2007 -------------------------------------------
March 9, 2007
It was the day that my life changed
It was the day that a dagger
broke through my skin
and tore right through my flesh
The wound was too deep to heal
The feeling of the cold metal
as the blood slowly flowed down my body
and the feeling of my heart
being steadily ripped in two
shall never be forgotten
The pain and the hurt
will last forever
but the lessons learned will also last
They will last until the end of time
a very heart felt write. it's really hard to give criticism on something like this, or any comment at all. I'm very sorry for your loss, perhaps the grief displayed is overhelming enough that I feel like there isn't much left to say...
Submission Name: March 9, 2007
