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    dots Submission Name: Soardots
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    Author: JAcksonJr
    ASL Info:    20/Male/NY
    Elite Ratio:    2.65 - 56/116/57
    Words: 49
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 238
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 386



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    dotsSoardots
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    Before the light sets
    We’ll fly high
    Embracing the sky
    The water glistens
    Sparkling bright
    Embracing sunlight
    The clouds reflect on
    Water still
    Bringing frigid chills
    Wings span preparing
    Set to soar
    Lifting off the shore

    As the sky grows gray
    We’re the ones
    Flying toward the sun




    Submitted on 2007-03-13 21:13:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      wow, this brought such a strong feeling as i was reading.
    i love how you made the format.
    that last segment made it seem like it was too good to be with the rest of the piece.
    and i believe it was.
    for some reason, i always feel that writing seems so strong when it mentions the sun and rain.
    nature in general.
    great work again.
    Peace<3


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    | Posted on 2007-03-13 00:00:00 | by BleedingTears | [ Reply to This ]



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