Nice stuff. Poem made me feel like I was tripping from an once of cocaine. The imagery possesses strong colors and tones. Poem sets the mood and put the reader into a trance. A superbly written poem with timing and flow. Keep telling the truth. A job well done.
Clarkie, I like the way this reads. Thanks for the kudos, but I can see you made your own changes and they work really well. I particularly like the feel of the last stanza. And I like the way you kept the Rhythm strong.