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    dots Submission Name: Come heredots
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    Author: lolavie
    ASL Info:    23/female/Michigan
    Elite Ratio:    3.26 - 70/175/103
    Words: 106
    Class/Type: Poetry/Sorry
    Total Views: 677
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       hmm i dont know what to tell u guys about this one...ill put into words and let u all know later..yea...oh, comment please..the guy who i wrote this for is very dear to me..i love him


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    dotsCome heredots
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    Sing to me
    with your halo shining like white diamonds
    Reach out far
    to the oceans that you once swam through
    Understand
    that I'll love you no matter what comes
    our way

    Trust me
    I'll never hurt you again
    If you only believe me
    Once in your life
    Trust this
    And I won't let you cry anymore

    Can't you see
    how far we've come we cant look back now
    With hands down
    Words cannot describe what you have given me
    Promise me
    Youll give me this chance, I wont let you down like before
    Come here







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      I read this that Saturday. I was trying to find a way to contact you. I wanted to walk to Detroit (I've walked enough miles this past week to get there and almost back... over ten miles a day through the city, the campus, around them and within).

    It is probably for him, no matter how much I wanted it for me.
    | Posted on 2004-06-23 00:00:00 | by DocJonathan | [ Reply to This ]


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