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    dots Submission Name: That Daydots
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    Author: AeThe Lost Poet
    ASL Info:    19/M/DE
    Elite Ratio:    3.6 - 147/184/122
    Words: 257
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    Average Vote:    5.0000
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    dotsThat Daydots
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    He- walks down the hall,
    With only one wall,
    Look there she is,
    His heart falls,
    He- tells himself,
    To let it go-let her go,
    He already let her know
    He- walks down the hall,
    With only one wall,
    Look there she is,
    His heart falls,
    (Hooray-)

    The best intentions,
    Are always underlined with disappointment,
    And the best plans,
    Are always hunted by fraud,
    The best of a person,
    Is always hiding the worst part of them,
    And the best of love,
    Is never to be called

    He never knows what to say,
    So maybe a simply “hey”
    Will make all of the,
    Butterflies go away,
    (You know?-)
    But they grow,
    You’ll never know,
    What they’ll do to you,
    Unless you let them show,
    Unless you give in a little bit,
    Unless you give it a go,
    And then despite,
    It doesn’t feel right,
    You might like
    It the more so

    Every once and a while
    As continually time gets older,
    She thinks he no longer cares,

    But just then,
    Here he comes again,
    A little boy,

    Tapping her on her shoulder,
    A little reminder that he’s still there

    The best intentions,
    Are always underlined with disappointment,
    And the best plans,
    Are always hunted by fraud,
    The best of a person,
    Is always hiding the worst part of them,
    And the best of love,
    Is never to be called

    He- walks down the hall,
    With only one wall,
    Look there she is,
    His heart falls
    Hooray…




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      I like this poem alot. It cute, but does he say hey to her in the end? I love how you have one thing and then another thing going on as well. You wrote it perfectly because there not mixed but they mingle a little together. So its not like two total different things put into one. Good work.
    | Posted on 2007-06-28 00:00:00 | by emoxday | [ Reply to This ]


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