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    dots Submission Name: Angel Whispererdots
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    Author: AeThe Lost Poet
    ASL Info:    19/M/DE
    Elite Ratio:    3.6 - 147/184/122
    Words: 152
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsAngel Whispererdots
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    She talks,
    And they listen,
    Ready at attention,
    Soldiers on a mission,
    No arguing,
    No complaining or fuss,
    She speaks to them,
    Like she speaks to us,
    I swear I saw her do it,
    I donít know how she does,
    I canít see angels,
    But I know she can because,

    She talks to angels
    Itís a talent only of hers,
    She talks to angels,
    And she has a way with words,

    She talks to angels,
    And they always stay,
    If only she knew, I too,
    Would be that way,
    Butósuper humans,
    How could I compete?
    They know way more,
    About her than me,

    She talks to angels,
    And only one time I overheard,
    She talks to angels,
    And sheís got a way with words,

    She talks to angels,
    The way she talks to me and you,
    And then I begin to wonder,
    Is she an angel, too?




    Submitted on 2007-03-14 12:11:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      AWEEEEEEEEEEEEEe that was great. i love this poem. it has some kind of weird emotion to it. good work
    | Posted on 2007-09-20 00:00:00 | by Demon__666 | [ Reply to This ]
      I don't really know what to say other than wow. I'm actually pretty speechless, the piece is quite simple but it is so effective and I have to say hats off to you. You have such a rare talent... Wow. Fleur xx
    | Posted on 2007-05-15 00:00:00 | by wilted_flower | [ Reply to This ]


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