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Sometimes 2 - Rebuttal...( A delve into the past )


Author: Ben Gunn
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Something ( ha ha ha - see what I did there? ) I wrote a long time ago, which was scarily accurate in some parts but frighteningly inaccurate in the main.

i
I still live ( though that is arguable ) -so at the very least - I am alive...( Cheer/Boo as applicable and mail it to me at 23, I don't care.

thanks.


Sometimes 2 - Rebuttal...( A delve into the past )



Sometimes I know,
I'm not going to make it
and I cant handle
My future 'cos I've fucked up my past.

So I'm going to live my Rock
and Roll lifestyle now-
And take all the risks I have to.

Sometimes I know,
I'm far too weak to
handle anything - without support
Drink, Drugs or Friends I suppose.

So I'm going to live my Rock
and Roll lifestyle now-
And take all the risks I have to.

Sometimes I know,
I'm digging my own grave...


Ben Gunn 16.03.86




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