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    dots Submission Name: All Encompassing Seasondots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 58
    Class/Type: Prose/Nature
    Total Views: 523
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    dotsAll Encompassing Seasondots
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    Green Blue
    reflections
    drifting onward
    to the sea
    of One

    I AM
    River
    Geese migrating
    far above
    Me

    Spring presents
    Herself
    to Winter
    in colored
    Dance

    Cool breezes
    of melting snow
    become warm
    waves
    which lap upon
    the shore

    I AM
    the Current
    Running
    Sunrise
    Sunset





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      Winter dies like a martyr
    The fire of the sun lapping at it's pure, white robe
    I am not sad to see it burn
    My heart jumps for joy
    Birds, as if emerging from a frozen spell, cry out in songs of happiness and love
    Flitting through the air like a million glad tidings of spring
    The robin, red breasted and proud, is the symbol

    The surface, hard and slick
    Has reduced itself to liquid
    The boat, stuck in the winter plains
    Is once again freed
    The fish can now leap out of the water
    Like water rabbits, searching for the sun

    Die, you cold, icy martyr
    Fade away like the thaw
    Do not return, please
    Although I know you won't comply
    You are always reborn, much to my contempt
    You, icy martyr, are my discontent.

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    Yay, spring has sprung! It is coming! We are free!

    One great poem deserves another, Tiff! You are forever an inspiration. Thank you.
    | Posted on 2007-04-04 00:00:00 | by manwithnoname | [ Reply to This ]
      This is really good Tiff. I like the unique minimilistic style. Spellin of mine sux. IT paints a nic pic and is easy to relate to. GOOTNTITE? Huh, isn't that a german virgin or sumtin?

    your friend
    ben
    | Posted on 2007-03-14 00:00:00 | by BenCollier | [ Reply to This ]
      You sure are many things - and one of them is talented. This time of year is very special, colours everywhere and everything is bursting into life.

    Another wee gem from the pen of CQ.

    CK.
    | Posted on 2007-03-14 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]


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