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    dots Submission Name: Rebelliondots
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    Author: Childoutspoken
    ASL Info:    21/F
    Elite Ratio:    3.73 - 340/440/126
    Words: 93
    Class/Type: Poetry/Angry
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    Description:
       A poem i wrote when i was aggrivated with people who kept constantly trying to control me.


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    Its like I can't have my own life anymore
    Everyone wants me to do something I can't
    Or be something that I'm not.
    My life is run by people
    other than myself
    I know its wrong
    But I can't stop it, or change it.
    In truth I just want to be left alone
    To be allowed to say what I want,
    Think what I want,
    And maybe be what I want.
    Why can't the people,
    Who think I'm living my life wrong,
    just give me a chance
    To show them who I really am?




    Submitted on 2004-06-09 18:41:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      very good...so many people feel this way, i like the very first line..."Its like I can't have my own life anymore"...it catches my eye so then i have to read the rest. nice going!
    | Posted on 2004-06-09 00:00:00 | by EmilyAnne | [ Reply to This ]
      unfortunately, at the age of 15 you probably aren't given much freedom to just be, i reckon. parents have more of a say about your life than you do. it's a drag, i know. i rebelled at 15, too. hey, at least you have this poetry outlet! write on! welcome to elite!
    | Posted on 2004-06-09 00:00:00 | by magnicat | [ Reply to This ]


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