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Tracing Places and-faces (updated)

Author: Ygi
ASL Info:    17/m
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Tracing Places and-faces (updated)

I traced places
I wanted to be and I
traced faces I wanted to be
infront of me at the end of the night
the night was descending and now sadly
we were all pretending to have a good time
it's not that no one was enjoying it's just
that we had been cheating all the while
this won't end as well as you had hoped it
would of

Now I know that faces are all that will be left
and so is it so wrong that I
fall in love with faces I've never met
we warmed ourselves by the fire and one girl said
"sometimes you just want to be known"

I trace the places I want to go on the walls
they act like clouds I'm missing
somone comments on my haze and I
smile a smile of sad success
you can't be something to everyone and
everything to
to somone to somone
we're just trying to prove we're
still worth a damn
so hard to pass up

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