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    dots Submission Name: I never needed you to muchdots
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    Author: DAlin
    Elite Ratio:    2.12 - 82/137/75
    Words: 108
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 706
    Average Vote:    5.0000
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    dotsI never needed you to muchdots
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    I never needed you to much
    Your love was never like I dreamed
    Do not believe in story lines
    In silence fighters, in the air
    It was a feeling, oh...so rare.

    Music and disaster
    Voices and a palm
    A forrest and a master
    Insanity and calm.

    With nonchalance and with no pleasure
    Intimacy, primal goal
    Leisure at it`s best behavior
    In another one`s sweet pole.

    A fear of the unknown insight now
    No sense at all for me, you maked
    I was abducted, from beauty taked
    Never knew that I was braked.

    ...dont keep in touch

    I never needed you to much.




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