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    dots Submission Name: To A Childhood Love dots
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    Author: Bones
    ASL Info:    40/M/ALABAMA
    Elite Ratio:    2.75 - 11/10/18
    Words: 239
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    Description:
       THIS IS TO A SPECIAL YOUNG LADY THAT I LOVE AND I HAVE SHAIRED MY LIFE WITH GROWING UP, WE ARE NOT AS CLOSE AS WE WERE GROWING UP BUT BLOOD IS THICKER THAT WATER; I WILL ALWAYS BE THERE WHEN SHE NEEDS ME


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    dotsTo A Childhood Love dots
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    When we first met I was just a Child.


    You were just starting to Grow.


    I had never been so Close,


    To such a beautiful Child.


    You filled my life with a Love,


    I had never known.


    As time went by you started to School.


    Then one day you were hurt at School.


    The anger whelmed up inside of Me,


    At the one I thought was responsible for You.


    For I had never felt this Way,


    For anyone before.


    The love I had for You,

    C-Left a mark on my Life.

    C-Today I still search for that, Love,

    C-And hope someday I will find It.



    Written by: William D Thompson JR





    Submitted on 2007-03-15 14:34:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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