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    dots Submission Name: No Mistakesdots
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    Author: just an angel
    ASL Info:    17/F/FL
    Elite Ratio:    3.89 - 95/109/59
    Words: 62
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsNo Mistakesdots
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    Ignorance is bliss
    Like that one last kiss
    Never felt again
    Gone from now and then

    Forgive and forget
    Like that last regret
    Erased from the mind
    Don't look behind

    Tomorrow is another day
    Like that last leeway
    One more chance to trip
    Then whipe up that slip

    We will continue to erase
    All things needed to be replaced




    Submitted on 2007-03-15 19:48:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      it seems like more could be added also the rhyming seems a bit forced, but in my own poetry thats common also so i know first hand its hard to avoid all in all i enjoyed this post but still believe it could be added on
    | Posted on 2007-03-19 00:00:00 | by Orcelandrya | [ Reply to This ]


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