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    dots Submission Name: All Laid Outdots
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    Author: Keller
    ASL Info:    18/F/Canada
    Elite Ratio:    2.57 - 36/26/17
    Words: 57
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 662
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    dotsAll Laid Outdots
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    Finally some results
    Finally some change
    No more struggles
    No more pain
    It is all over
    Everything is laid out
    All the cards are on the table
    All laid out for everyone
    To study
    To criticize
    To humiliate
    Everyone knows the score
    Everyone knows the cost
    No more secrets
    Because we all know
    This is the end




    Submitted on 2007-03-16 01:37:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      very good ..very simple no big feasts nor similarity or complected images
    poem when the words are just tears and fears
    you have a way with words I do like it ..and I will put it in my fav to
    | Posted on 2007-03-16 00:00:00 | by muhammed | [ Reply to This ]
      very good ..very simple no big feasts nor similarity or complected images
    poem when the words are just tears and fears
    you have a way with words I do like it ..and I will put it in my fav to
    | Posted on 2007-03-16 00:00:00 | by muhammed | [ Reply to This ]
      WOW, this is realy good. I like how you used the cards. Keep in touch!
    | Posted on 2007-03-16 00:00:00 | by Depression420 | [ Reply to This ]


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