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    dots Submission Name: Genius Derived from Insanity dots
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    Author: Draigon
    ASL Info:    25/m/Al
    Elite Ratio:    4.25 - 164/196/91
    Words: 258
    Class/Type: Story/Dark
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    dotsGenius Derived from Insanity dots
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    I've seen many dark things in my life that have forever scared my soul, the very center of my being. Foreboding nightmares plague my every slumber. They foretell of a blight that is to soon take us all into its embrace.

    I search for answers through philosophy,
    and through history. I think that maybe if I could just get people to recollect their past mistakes, that perhaps we may be saved from this perilous plight. Diligently I study--studying seems to be becoming madness. This madness, it erodes my soul, and rips a hole asunder in my biological make-up. More insanity seeps from the gaping wound. But...ownward I study, and try to find an antidote. Nothing comes to mind.

    Memory after memory, I study the minds of lives that have been raped. They offer some significant knowledge, but most of it is dead to me. No longer relevant to the present times.

    Knowledge of government and commom sense seems to be lacking in these days. Maybe the last days. This is the material that makes the void in my mind. It also induces my feverish studies, and maybe my insanity too.

    Night slowly becomes day, but the madness, it consumes me. It will never let me rest. Will anything stop this? No answer. Should I expect one? The voices inside my head seem to have shunned me and left me alone. Alone inside the void that inhabits my mind.

    Lonliness overtakes me as I stare in bewilderment at the chaos outside my window.




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      First off, I was drawn in by the title. I liked it a lot.

    Secondly this was my most favorite part:
    "Diligently I study--studying seems to be becoming madness. This madness, it erodes my soul, and rips a hole asunder in my biological make-up. More insanity seeps from the gaping wound."

    This seems to have described my high school years. I am completely mad.

    I think you are a rather lovely writer. Good job.
    | Posted on 2007-03-16 00:00:00 | by Raivn | [ Reply to This ]
      i like.
    there are only a few who actually think these days. contemplate over whats going on around them, good or bad. and if bad, then try to understand it, the reasons and the solutions.
    and the plight of those who make the effort is never pretty.
    i think you've penned this really well. its articulate in depicting these circumstances.
    well done.
    | Posted on 2007-03-16 00:00:00 | by Sanjhana | [ Reply to This ]
      Hey this is great, i don't really know if this is what you were going for but this was what i got out of it,
    A person that spends an obsessive amount of time, looking for anwsers, the truth.
    Driving someone to the edge of insanity, by the overly adaquate quest for knowledge, which can consume a person.
    I like this.
    Well that is all i got to say.
    Peace.
    | Posted on 2007-03-16 00:00:00 | by WonderfulComa | [ Reply to This ]


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