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    dots Submission Name: The Curse.....dots
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    Author: allmine
    ASL Info:    25/chick/your nightmares
    Elite Ratio:    2.52 - 33/69/45
    Words: 176
    Class/Type: Story/
    Total Views: 777
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    Bytes: 927



    Description:
       This is something I had written because people have called me both cupids daughter and santans daughter so this is a short story I have written about that... I always can win a fight by useing this when I can say that I love someone more.. And the whole getting couples togather and brokenhearted is all true....


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    dotsThe Curse.....dots
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    She can love others more than a normal person could... But also gets her heart broken so much more because she falls in love so easyly... She is the daughter of cupid and santan... She is a fallen angel... She cant get anyone to love her but can always help others.. She has yet to fail in getting a couple togather.. but when it comes to her love life she cant even get her own... People take her kindheartedness and use her because they know they can.. Most people would have no heart left after how much pain her heart has taken.. but because she is cupids daughter her heart cant die... She cant die... Santain has made her stay alive.. She has attempted befour but he made it to where she must live to suffer...
    She has to live with the pain of being broken hearted all her life with no escape...
    set to fall in love with people who will never love her back and will only break her heart...





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