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    dots Submission Name: Bananadots
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    Author: elephantasia
    ASL Info:    37/F/UK
    Elite Ratio:    3.54 - 398/490/159
    Words: 45
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsBananadots
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    Stripped bare of skin,
    sweet is the smell of true beauty.
    Taste is in this starch reality.
    Curving into lips embrace;
    often much more is bitten off
    than can be chewed upon.
    Feeling all gooey and mushy now.

    Such are the wonders of bananas.




    Submitted on 2007-03-16 15:45:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Oh, I like it!

    With a piece of fruit this sensuous no wonder men love to watch women eat bananas!
    | Posted on 2007-03-16 00:00:00 | by Raivn | [ Reply to This ]
      :)
    brilliantly written i think.
    a perfect example of the mundane transformed into an object of intrigue and appreciation through perfectly chosen words.
    a very sensuous description.
    its an interesting take on a banana.
    | Posted on 2007-03-16 00:00:00 | by Sanjhana | [ Reply to This ]


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