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When I'm 12

Author: Ygi
ASL Info:    17/m
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probably gonna come back to this, idk

When I'm 12

Making angels in the snow
they looked like craters on the moon through the lenses
we made promises to ourselves
I hope I die when I'm 12

you took a picture of our faces after we
had been busy
making fun out of air too cold to hate
we shared a kiss that tasted like
all I've wanted
You left, and I stumbled off the curb

we made angels where there was
just the cold ice and snow
our eyes looked like craters in the skies
we made promises to ourselves
I hope I die when I'm 12

Submitted on 2007-03-16 20:49:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Aww. this was so sad but cute. it seems to me all the promises that you guys kept together were broken. just from your writings now it seems that you are very sad, and if you are i hope your happy soon. :)

<3 black rose
| Posted on 2007-04-02 00:00:00 | by black rose13 | [ Reply to This ]

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