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    dots Submission Name: I like me this waydots
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    Author: b_v_grant
    ASL Info:    18/m/Jamaica
    Elite Ratio:    3.3 - 120/115/66
    Words: 241
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
    Total Views: 122
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1493



    Description:
       just a song i wrote when i was confused


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    dotsI like me this waydots
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    Verse 1

    I was single til the day you came and save me,
    {not broken anymore}
    We've been up and down you want to date me,
    At first I thought that I was crazy,
    {to think this could work}
    Cuz I dont wanna be no one's baby.
    You made your move,
    Its what I want,
    Dont you see I'm wanting you.
    It's easy,
    Make your mind up,
    I feel it and you feel it too.

    Chorus

    This is my first song dedicated,
    I hope that you will appreciate it,
    I want you to understand me,
    And hear what I say very clearly
    I tremble.... At the sight of you
    I tremble.... At the sight of you

    Verse 2

    No need to get upset for something simple,
    Flirting with a guy is not trying to hurt you....
    I'm not going to change myself just cuz you say I should,
    I kno this statement will make you misunderstood

    Chorus

    Bridge

    Everything you will say,
    Just waiting for the right day,
    But you know what I will say,
    I say I like me this way.
    {its how I am, I like me this way..}
    You made your move,
    Its what I want,
    Dont you see I'm wanting you.
    It's easy,
    Make your mind up,
    I feel it and you feel it too.

    Cant you tell I feel it too

    Chorus





    Submitted on 2007-03-16 23:47:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I like this. Its a good "This is me, accept me as I am" piece. You should try sending it to the person in question. I think it would put things in perspectie for them.

    Your Best Buddy,
    Jay.
    | Posted on 2007-03-23 00:00:00 | by Flowerinbloom | [ Reply to This ]



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