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    dots Submission Name: Let your Self embrace yourselfdots
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    Author: elephantasia
    ASL Info:    37/F/UK
    Elite Ratio:    3.54 - 398/490/159
    Words: 170
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsLet your Self embrace yourselfdots
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    It bubbles,
    like a witches brew;
    and I am spellbound,
    not in a pleasant way.
    It grips me like voodoo.
    "Cook! Little pot! Cook!"
    Fed by the fire
    of the Devil's forked tongue,
    it overboils.
    Spreads through my streets;
    takes over my town;
    'til I sit quaking on this earth.
    What started as a spark
    billows and blows
    into a raging furnace.
    And still I fan the flames
    with tainted logic.

    Spread myself wider
    into an accepting community
    circling my Self
    around in a healing embrace.
    "Rage! Little Fire! Rage!"
    A rekindled compassionate connection
    deeply remembers how
    to calm even the most anxious mind.

    Love is not denial in favour of feigned joy.
    Love encompasses all that exists
    and allows for expression of all that is.
    Let us sit with our own woes
    and be there for our own selves,
    so we heal our conflicts inside the comforts of our own hearts
    without having to watch them play out on the movie screen of life.




    Submitted on 2007-03-17 04:34:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      "Love is not denial in favour of feigned joy.
    Love encompasses all that exists
    and allows for expression of all that is.
    Let us sit with our own woes
    and be there for our own selves,
    so we heal our conflicts inside the comforts of our own hearts
    without having to watch them play out on the movie screen of life"

    I LOVE THIS!!!

    "It bubbles,
    like a witches brew;
    and I am spellbound,
    not in a pleasant way."

    It's so funny that you put it like this...because I tend to follow expressions with that term..."Not in a pleasant way."

    It made me laugh...but just that part...the rest made me sigh and be happy cause I found something worth reading!!!

    Great job on this!!!

    | Posted on 2007-09-09 00:00:00 | by Raivn | [ Reply to This ]
      this is good.....REALLY good..i REALLY like it lol...especially the last verse...it makes perfect sence and is easy to understand....i can teel u have gone through in order to write something like this.....well i think =p....that or u just had a verry boring day one day and thought this through...but i doubt it...its to deep for something like that =]

    EW
    | Posted on 2007-04-11 00:00:00 | by eagle wing | [ Reply to This ]


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