A Night In The Kitchen by Leala

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Submission Name: A Night In The Kitchen dots

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Author:	Leala
Elite Ratio:	3.72 - 245/299/70
Words:	58

Class/Type:	Poetry/Love
Total Views:	141
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
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Description:
About me and my love... and anyone who can relate.

A Night In The Kitchen dots

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A soft voice sings
loving notes of calm,
and we embrace softly.

A gentle kiss
a sweet dual serenade...
and the dance begins.

Movements that feel
so natural
familiar and exhilirating.

Hunger is in our eyes
with glowing edges of love.

We laugh a little
and dance some more;
forgetting time
and finding
...perfection.

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||| Comments |||
Aw. This was sweet. I think you could elaborate more, and give more imagery to the emraces and the kisses. But, then again, I liked how simple it was. It was sweet and to the point. It almost makes me miss my ex and how we'd dance together...

Overall, it was very good (like I said, I think it could use more imagery...) and I really, honestly enjoyed it...

*~ Mist ~*
| Posted on 2007-03-19 00:00:00 | by PrincessDoom13 | [ Reply to This ]

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