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    dots Submission Name: Love-Foreverdots
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    Author: Leala
    Elite Ratio:    3.72 - 245/299/70
    Words: 105
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 157
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 676



    Description:
       This is intended to be about myself and my love and anyone who has a love like it.

    The last line and title was inspired by the over use of "love" and "I love you" and a friend of mine; he has a picture of his love and himself titled "My Forever and I" It always made me stop and smile.


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    dotsLove-Foreverdots
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    When comfort is absolute,
    the flames are low
    the coals hot and lasting.

    The mind yearns for a scent.
    The body tingles for a touch.
    The soul awaits that perfect dance.

    Like never before; content,
    yet bursting with energy
    to make every dream real.

    Color-Bursts and Picturettes;
    struggle to be translated
    into meager words.

    On a new path together,
    dancing in the grass together,
    laughing and living together.

    Two.
    Out of their element.
    You might call it love.


    They call it Forever.




    Submitted on 2007-03-17 16:55:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      easy flow... you know how I feel about this...
    | Posted on 2007-03-25 00:00:00 | by orange | [ Reply to This ]
      Nice poem I like it, very visual and imaginative. I like how it feels like you put your emotions towards the poem and how I felt it and if that is what you were coming across then you did it keep up the good work peace & stay safe...
    | Posted on 2007-03-25 00:00:00 | by Cordell | [ Reply to This ]
      this post was beautiful easy to follow and all together a great poem. theres nothing i'd change. which is rare honestly lol, i hope to read many more posts by you in the future
    | Posted on 2007-03-19 00:00:00 | by Orcelandrya | [ Reply to This ]



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