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RhymeRhymeRhyme!


Author: darkwiccan14
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Class/Type: Rant /Being a Teen
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woo! good i sound like a prep now o.O *Savve mee!* lol!!!!


RhymeRhymeRhyme!



I'm cute,
I'm hot,
I'm all you've got,
I'm good like that,
So I stay off the pot,
I dont know bout you,
But I really dont get,
Drunk alot,
So you know a little bout me,
Even though you ought,
To know yourself,
It's the bargain you bought!




Submitted on 2007-03-18 10:43:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  it is sweet as candy~
| Posted on 2007-07-16 00:00:00 | by lyricvixen | [ Reply to This ]
  very good, made me laugh and think. true, true, true.
| Posted on 2007-05-06 00:00:00 | by VampireMaiden | [ Reply to This ]
  haha i like it. let'em know what they got what the don't and what they need.

if only preps that were bright.

(teehee)

~shadow
| Posted on 2007-03-18 00:00:00 | by in shadow | [ Reply to This ]


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