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    dots Submission Name: Who I Amdots
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    Author: Orcelandrya
    ASL Info:    18/f/ont
    Elite Ratio:    4.94 - 18/8/9
    Words: 121
    Class/Type: Poetry/Being a Teen
    Total Views: 199
    Average Vote:    4.5000
    Bytes: 810



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       BLAH BLAH BLAH i need to lay off the caffine late at night


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    dotsWho I Amdots
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    Just another nameless face
    Lost within this crowd
    Too afraid to let someone in
    Yet afraid to be alone
    Never standing still
    Taking for granted those precious gifts of love given
    I sing my own anthem
    A song no one else can hear
    Music no one else understands
    All the while
    Silent screams echo in my head
    NOTICE ME
    ACCEPT ME
    No one sees
    No one understands
    Though few even try
    So distant from the world
    Lost within my mind
    Within my day dreams
    Eveyday people ask me
    'Do you even know who you are?'
    To them I simply smile
    Because the answer is yes
    I am rebellion
    I am sarcasm}
    I am dreams
    I am endless
    I am
    Me




    Submitted on 2007-03-18 20:40:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This really good. I know how it feels to not be accepted and also to be confused about who you really are. I had always been a sort of 'out of the place kind of person'.

    I sing my own anthem
    A song no one else can hear
    Music no one else understands
    All the while
    Silent screams echo in my head
    NOTICE ME
    ACCEPT ME

    This is my fav. line

    | Posted on 2007-03-25 00:00:00 | by marray proetus | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow this was extremley good..it just jumps out and really says how much you want to be accepted but be accepted for who you are and not someone your aren't. It just..i can definitley relate to it and its amazing how many people just want to get noticed and what they'll do inorder to get noticed. I agree with you we should be ourselves no matter what and people should accept us for us not for something we're not. Really great post its amazing.

    I tilt my hat and bid the farewell...
    Panzyrocker
    | Posted on 2007-03-20 00:00:00 | by panzyrocker | [ Reply to This ]
      This is a pretty good poem! I thought you should write a poem about something good because so far all your poems are a little scary! But I like them!
    ~*~Kristen~*~
    | Posted on 2007-03-20 00:00:00 | by PrincessKrisen | [ Reply to This ]



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