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    dots Submission Name: i hatedots
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    Author: Mr.Ordinary
    ASL Info:    21/M/Navy
    Elite Ratio:    3.17 - 64/102/41
    Words: 1
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 739
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 29



    Description:
       me putting out my thoughts where poelp can read them but not understand


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsi hatedots
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    wpdmiawanigthpwjailhsvmawijhi




    Submitted on 2007-03-18 23:20:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      as funny as this sounds i still remember what that stands for 3 years latter lol
    | Posted on 2010-09-16 00:00:00 | by Mr.Ordinary | [ Reply to This ]
      This was the best poem I ever read. It's so random and crazy. You get a standing ovation.

    And i tried the five minute thing. It worked. not my best, but it was good.

    ~*~katara~*~
    | Posted on 2008-05-06 00:00:00 | by daughterofdeath | [ Reply to This ]
      This was the best poem I ever read. It's so random and crazy. You get a standing ovation.

    And i tried the five minute thing. It worked. not my best, but it was good.
    | Posted on 2008-05-06 00:00:00 | by daughterofdeath | [ Reply to This ]
      haha good one
    | Posted on 2007-03-19 00:00:00 | by foxy lee | [ Reply to This ]
      wow this is the most indescribably amazing piece i have read today. i'm very truly touched. the emotions portrayed in this could never be said better.

    emily
    | Posted on 2007-03-19 00:00:00 | by only_a_dreamX | [ Reply to This ]
      I hope your feeling okay.. if anything is wrong you know you can tell me....
    | Posted on 2007-03-19 00:00:00 | by allmine | [ Reply to This ]


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