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    dots Submission Name: no heaven lurks in the coldest of heartsdots
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    Author: social circus
    ASL Info:    16/M/LA
    Elite Ratio:    1.66 - 17/57/36
    Words: 80
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsno heaven lurks in the coldest of heartsdots
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    i am a light that has been dimmed
    i am the wind tha calms down
    i am the brain that goes brain dead
    i can be the world and i can be hell
    but no heaven lurks in the coldest hearts
    i am guilt turned into suicide
    i am warm that has been frozen
    i am worthless and broken
    i can be the world and i can be hell
    but no heaven lurks in the coldest of hearts




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    ||| Comments |||
      awe nice.
    spark iyt

    laterrrrrrrrrr
    | Posted on 2007-03-19 00:00:00 | by darkness | [ Reply to This ]
      from literary point of view, its a bit confusing at first to understand.......
    u showing extreme frustration and the dark side of how things have shaped up....
    | Posted on 2007-03-19 00:00:00 | by jagruti_shah | [ Reply to This ]


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