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    dots Submission Name: happy placedots
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    Author: social circus
    ASL Info:    16/M/LA
    Elite Ratio:    1.66 - 17/57/36
    Words: 19
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotshappy placedots
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    if everyone in the world would close there eyes and picture heacen the world would be a happy place




    Submitted on 2007-03-18 23:37:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      cool yo. that mite work but evryones heaven is different and then theyed clash and then whoa...

    yeahh good write yo.
    | Posted on 2007-03-19 00:00:00 | by darkness | [ Reply to This ]
      You really think it would be a happy place? Well many people picture heaven differently. But how you put it together, it sounds pretty nice (*heaven). I can see it in one of those church pamphlets.
    | Posted on 2007-03-19 00:00:00 | by emoxday | [ Reply to This ]
      I take it you mean heaven?
    Tried it and it actually scares me.
    I wish it was that simple though, nice thought.
    | Posted on 2007-03-19 00:00:00 | by Kube | [ Reply to This ]


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