I like this one a lot, it's written beautifully. I had a lot of friends like that, and in the end I realized they weren't really my friends at all. You use a lot of good lines and the rhythm fits good. I think I might have to add this to my favorites list. Keep up the good work brother.
This is lovely, a wonderful, true story you've told us here at eliteskills, treasure this peice, it is absolute Jenious, (Yes, with a J not a G) I love this one. Its so true what you have portrayed here, letting yourself be involved intheir problems and then having no one there in return, its sad. THank you for bringing this to us. ~Sicobe R. Crow