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    dots Submission Name: Confessions of a Cutter[escape]dots
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    Author: beautiful_lie2
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    dotsConfessions of a Cutter[escape]dots
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    I hold the razor in my hand
    as the full moon casts a shadow
    onto my face.
    I gaze at the brilliant gleam on my sweet escape.
    escape from the world.
    escape from the pain.
    escape from the pressure building inside of me until it finally bursts from my pores.
    so I slide the one thing that saves me across my pale wrist just to watch the bright red substance ooze from my newest accomplishment.
    you watch from a dark corner wondering why i do this.
    you dont know the answer
    honestly neither do I




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