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    dots Submission Name: Degrade Medots
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    Author: AeThe Lost Poet
    ASL Info:    19/M/DE
    Elite Ratio:    3.6 - 147/184/122
    Words: 57
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsDegrade Medots
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    We degrade each other,
    we dance and waltz with words,
    Have time to unwind,
    the n shadows lurk,
    Play like children,
    Who tiptoe in night clouds,
    Look back, check our steps,
    And not be too loud,
    Say we hat each other,
    It hurt that you hate me,
    But you love me... don't you?
    whenever you degrade me...




    Submitted on 2007-03-19 10:31:59     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Good write.
    I really like this bit...
    "Play like children,
    Who tiptoe in night clouds,
    Look back, check our steps,
    And not to be so loud'

    Good stuff!!

    Kube.
    | Posted on 2007-03-20 00:00:00 | by Kube | [ Reply to This ]
      well put. i like the sincerec question at the end. it seems so dark so dear. the unanswerable question that lurks in the shadows of lovers at play.

    i can realate. it always makes you wonder

    ~shadow
    | Posted on 2007-03-19 00:00:00 | by in shadow | [ Reply to This ]


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