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    dots Submission Name: Picture on the walldots
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    Author: koolness
    ASL Info:    17/female/city of evil
    Elite Ratio:    2.58 - 80/106/56
    Words: 53
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 757
    Average Vote:    4.5000
    Bytes: 356



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    dotsPicture on the walldots
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    no unique pattern of sence of meaning,
    no happyness only a sence of grieving.
    plain, dull, and lifeless.
    only wishing there was a sence of niceness.
    bleak. no emotion on her pale face,
    maybe this picture i can replace....
    Colorful, Happy, Sence of meaning,
    this is a better picture, the one I'm seeing.




    Submitted on 2007-03-19 12:41:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Hey, this poem is awesome, its beautifully written, your doing a great job, keep it up :)

    Kevin
    | Posted on 2007-03-23 00:00:00 | by kevin100 | [ Reply to This ]
      Yeah its a good mixture of thoughts and views, i dig it.

    Kube.
    | Posted on 2007-03-20 00:00:00 | by Kube | [ Reply to This ]
      some how i can see were you are coming from... but also i can't.... not alot of people can do that.... its ether one or the other... i like it!!!!
    | Posted on 2007-03-19 00:00:00 | by yamifox | [ Reply to This ]


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