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    Author: necromance
    Elite Ratio:    2.38 - 43/40/19
    Words: 59
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsFlowersdots
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    slide down my playground and
    bring me your black tulips
    black rain
    breathes his mask and
    tastes like purple

    paint in her eyes and
    eats her lipstick
    lover
    watch the spiders crawl
    crawl up her thighs

    stroke my brain to sleep darling
    stand at my window
    picking my roses
    she wants it
    she wants it not...




    Submitted on 2007-03-19 13:58:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      o.k., so i thought i'd read another one thinking that maybe the last work might not be typical but hoping it was. you write beautifully. and this is coming from a professional writer as well.. i'm going to keep watching you and if i come across any major publications that you might relate to, i'll let you know. i don't know how interested in publishing your work you are. they generally tend to want about a 40 to 60 page manuscript for submission, but you seem to have a lot of material. anyway, thanks again and i'll see you around,
    merlo marconi
    | Posted on 2007-06-16 00:00:00 | by blackbird | [ Reply to This ]
      Weird, indeed! Nicely and deftly done ... dark and very arcane ... neat and nifty ... bravo ... bravo ... bravo ... michael
    | Posted on 2007-04-03 00:00:00 | by Algol46 | [ Reply to This ]
      eeeep!
    yes i have read this one haha
    howeverrr...
    i disagree! many things can taste like purple,
    depending on what your view of purple is,
    because nothing has to be exactly what the word says it would be

    correct?
    CORRECT!

    haha
    anyways...
    twas a wonderful poem
    and i likeses its!

    i shall be adding it to my favorites because it is a lovely thing that proves that purple has a flavor

    ~chaos~
    | Posted on 2007-03-30 00:00:00 | by whispered_chaos | [ Reply to This ]
      she wants is she wants it not. ohh wonderful...
    i especially liked the black tuplips and the spiders crawling .. it's scuh a wild form.

    kudos

    ~shadow
    | Posted on 2007-03-20 00:00:00 | by in shadow | [ Reply to This ]
      Yes what does purple taste like?

    Good stuuf though.
    | Posted on 2007-03-20 00:00:00 | by Kube | [ Reply to This ]
      It was good. How can something taste like purple?
    I have deoderant that smells like purple but...?
    | Posted on 2007-03-19 00:00:00 | by DonkeyMan | [ Reply to This ]


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