Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Battlefield of the Damneddots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: Backavar
    ASL Info:    22/M/Las Vegas
    Elite Ratio:    1.58 - 0/2/20
    Words: 262
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
    Total Views: 773
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1819



    Description:
       Written completely from the heart. A view of a dying world where hope still breathes.


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsBattlefield of the Damneddots
    -------------------------------------------


    A thousand corpses
    Litter the flowing plains
    Where a battle has been fought
    For all eternity.

    The screams of the dead
    And the dying
    Echo in the dark recesses
    Of the human soul.

    Faces contorted in terror
    At what has been wrought
    Knowing they cannot escape
    Even through death.

    Through the morass of blood
    I wade and watch
    Unable to lift my weapon
    A witness to the horror.

    I watch as a lover
    Becomes a whore
    Leaving a precious affair
    For the arms of another.

    I watch as a warrior
    Becomes a mercenary
    Abandoning honor
    For the sake of gold.

    I watch as a child
    Has all innocence taken
    Left as dead
    For all purpose is gone.

    And I am one of them.

    I am all of them.

    I am none of them.

    Watching, I see
    What you do not
    Images fade to milky white
    Then nothing.

    On the battlefield
    There are no sides
    Just bloodshed,
    Total war.

    A war of souls
    On this battlefield of the damned
    Few can calm
    None can stop.

    Every horror witnessed
    I wish my eyes to rot
    Nothing can be done
    As chaos rages around me.

    That is the way of the world
    This is the truth of the soul
    Shall you listen
    Or will you fall?

    After love has been slain
    Honor destroyed
    Innocence shattered
    Hope still lasts the night.

    Where does this come from
    This hope of dreams?
    Whispered upon Seraph's lips
    Gliding softly on angel's wings.




    Submitted on 2007-03-19 15:45:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    cleverly shunned written by CrypticBard
    Hollow Points written by RequiemOfDreams
    To written by SavedDragon
    Bond written by saartha
    Munyonyo written by expiring_touch
    Once Again written by krs3332003
    I will call out your name written by RisingSon
    Pressure written by hybridsongwrite
    Incubus written by monad
    Date night written by expiring_touch
    Cage written by distortedcloud
    Wasps written by Wolfwatching
    Devils in the Details written by endlessgame23
    The Song on Your Guitar written by SavedDragon
    What happens written by Wolfwatching
    This written by Chelebel
    Pain, an elixir. written by Ramneet
    Sunset written by rev.jpfadeproof
    Giving written by jjd
    The Promise written by annie0888
    Hopelessly Blind written by ForgottenGraves
    Life changes in a moment written by Ramneet
    Push written by JanePlane
    One Thing written by Wolfwatching
    Song written by Daniel Barlow
    In My Head written by faideddarkness
    A Sonnet for Nina written by SavedDragon
    Our Cinder Crisis written by SavedDragon
    Summer Nights written by ollie_wicked
    Fathoms of the Lullaby Sea written by HisNameIsNoMore

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry
    New users can only get up to two comments without commenting.