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    dots Submission Name: Battlefield of the Damneddots

    Author: Backavar
    ASL Info:    22/M/Las Vegas
    Elite Ratio:    1.58 - 0/2/20
    Words: 262
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
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       Written completely from the heart. A view of a dying world where hope still breathes.

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    dotsBattlefield of the Damneddots

    A thousand corpses
    Litter the flowing plains
    Where a battle has been fought
    For all eternity.

    The screams of the dead
    And the dying
    Echo in the dark recesses
    Of the human soul.

    Faces contorted in terror
    At what has been wrought
    Knowing they cannot escape
    Even through death.

    Through the morass of blood
    I wade and watch
    Unable to lift my weapon
    A witness to the horror.

    I watch as a lover
    Becomes a whore
    Leaving a precious affair
    For the arms of another.

    I watch as a warrior
    Becomes a mercenary
    Abandoning honor
    For the sake of gold.

    I watch as a child
    Has all innocence taken
    Left as dead
    For all purpose is gone.

    And I am one of them.

    I am all of them.

    I am none of them.

    Watching, I see
    What you do not
    Images fade to milky white
    Then nothing.

    On the battlefield
    There are no sides
    Just bloodshed,
    Total war.

    A war of souls
    On this battlefield of the damned
    Few can calm
    None can stop.

    Every horror witnessed
    I wish my eyes to rot
    Nothing can be done
    As chaos rages around me.

    That is the way of the world
    This is the truth of the soul
    Shall you listen
    Or will you fall?

    After love has been slain
    Honor destroyed
    Innocence shattered
    Hope still lasts the night.

    Where does this come from
    This hope of dreams?
    Whispered upon Seraph's lips
    Gliding softly on angel's wings.

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