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I Tried

Author: lynn marsters
ASL Info:    20/f/canada
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I Tried

I Tried

But I'm tired

I Wanted

But I've failed

I Loved

But I guess I lost

And I did Try

But please know I'm tired

and I've been tired for a long time

"My belief in his ability to change never changed until he changed."

And I couldn't try anymore.

And here I am
at square one
and I was the one
who had to make the choice.

Submitted on 2007-03-19 15:47:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  wow, i loved the format and how you seemed to echo your own thoughts, i really liked the end

"And here I am
at square one
and I was the one
who had to make the choice."

it left me thinking...

good write,
| Posted on 2007-03-19 00:00:00 | by dismal_s child | [ Reply to This ]

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