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    dots Submission Name: Confidencedots
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    Author: lynn marsters
    ASL Info:    20/f/canada
    Elite Ratio:    3.41 - 49/61/32
    Words: 100
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsConfidencedots
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    Confidence

    In You

    is fading over time

    I don't want to be wrong
    I refuse to be wrong

    But you scare me sometimes
    how you look at me
    what are you thinking?

    should I be afraid?
    are you changing?
    are you tempted?

    Are you going to hurt me in the end?

    My belief in your ability to change
    Never changed
    Until you changed

    And now I'm in too deep
    to just back away

    I'm seein' it through to the end

    I love you
    and I can't let go




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      I really understood this piece its the way i've felt many a time sitting there with the person i thought was the one when they give me the look. the look that tells you they're bored they dont wanna be with you anymore and don't wanna be near you that they "want some space". So cudos to you for writting about it. And can you comment my piece Endless?
    | Posted on 2007-08-24 00:00:00 | by panzyrocker | [ Reply to This ]


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