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Author: lynn marsters
ASL Info:    20/f/canada
Elite Ratio:    3.41 - 49 /61 /32
Words: 100
Class/Type: Misc /Misc
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This one and I Tried are before and after



In You

is fading over time

I don't want to be wrong
I refuse to be wrong

But you scare me sometimes
how you look at me
what are you thinking?

should I be afraid?
are you changing?
are you tempted?

Are you going to hurt me in the end?

My belief in your ability to change
Never changed
Until you changed

And now I'm in too deep
to just back away

I'm seein' it through to the end

I love you
and I can't let go

Submitted on 2007-03-19 15:48:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I really understood this piece its the way i've felt many a time sitting there with the person i thought was the one when they give me the look. the look that tells you they're bored they dont wanna be with you anymore and don't wanna be near you that they "want some space". So cudos to you for writting about it. And can you comment my piece Endless?
| Posted on 2007-08-24 00:00:00 | by panzyrocker | [ Reply to This ]

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