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    dots Submission Name: Love the sadnessdots
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    Author: Emo Angel
    ASL Info:    15/f/Texas
    Elite Ratio:    3.06 - 17/26/24
    Words: 86
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsLove the sadnessdots
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    Love the sadness
    Love the sweetness
    Love this madness
    In completeness
    Love the thought of you with me
    My goddess, friend and fantacy

    Your eyes are deep
    Your skin is pale
    Watching you as you sleep
    My hands would softly downward trail
    With words to reach the heart inside
    But silent thought is where I hide

    In silent thought
    Of consequence
    Of long-forgotten innocence
    The fever-pitch we can't control
    The silent music of the soul



    Lance Conklin
    2007 Lance Conklin




    Submitted on 2007-03-20 09:23:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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