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    dots Submission Name: Love/My Life cont.dots
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    Author: Emo Angel
    ASL Info:    15/f/Texas
    Elite Ratio:    3.06 - 17/26/24
    Words: 150
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 669
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       My BROTHER wrote this.Not me. If you can't tell by reading this he's gay.


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    dotsLove/My Life cont.dots
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    When all I hear is the one I love say good bye.
    Why can't I find true love?
    Like a man God has sent from above.
    Why can't I find a man to love me for whom I am?
    And I don't mean just any man.
    A man that would love me through and through,
    A man that could say he loved me and it be true.
    Why must people say the things they say?
    Why do they say I should not be gay?
    Why must they say I have gone the wrong way?
    And why do I have to hear this everyday?
    Does anyone feel the way I do?
    Does anyone else look for love that is true?
    If anyone does feel the way I do.


    Lance Charles Conklin
    2007 Lance Charles Conklin




    Submitted on 2007-03-20 09:28:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Nice poem I like it, very visual and imaginative. I like how it feels like you put your emotions towards the poem and how I felt it and if that is what you were coming across then you did it keep up the good work peace & stay safe...
    | Posted on 2007-03-25 00:00:00 | by Cordell | [ Reply to This ]


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