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Author: Ghetto_King
ASL Info:    19 m ft. lauderdale
Elite Ratio:    0.76 - 4 /33 /54
Words: 232
Class/Type: Poetry /Passion
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just writing graphic but not graphic what else can i say sex


Kiss, touch and thrust positions switching and motions
Sending your partner into many orgasmic convolution
Sweet nectar tasting hearts pounding and racing feeling great surges of sensation
As body parts that was single now are molded into one
Venturing as far inside as the hole may run
Scratches, moans and screams are flung, as the sound from this scene is song
As pleasure glands are stimulated an the feeling maximize
On this night the essence of sex is personified
As your legs part ways touching every inch of your insides
As screams and hard but gentle strokes coincide
As motions go from slow to fast the range of positions large and vase
Never wanting this glimpse of bliss too end or pass
As breaths you try too catch and grab, inside you my name is sketch and stab
As you ride this experience out like a wave an inside you I play
Seeing that look of complete and total satisfaction written across your face
As my tongue touch you with pleasurable grace
S exual gratification as vase as the stars
E cstasy made too know this world and within it your venture far
X, which marks the end and the spot
So I end this with X as once again the process starts

Submitted on 2007-03-20 13:56:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  WOW! This is a very pationate and heart felt piece. Kee up the good work.
| Posted on 2007-03-20 00:00:00 | by Depression420 | [ Reply to This ]

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