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    dots Submission Name: Sexdots
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    Author: Ghetto_King
    ASL Info:    19 m ft. lauderdale
    Elite Ratio:    0.76 - 4/33/54
    Words: 232
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 835
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1370



    Description:
       just writing graphic but not graphic what else can i say sex


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    dotsSexdots
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    Sex
    Kiss, touch and thrust positions switching and motions
    Sending your partner into many orgasmic convolution
    Sweet nectar tasting hearts pounding and racing feeling great surges of sensation
    Sex
    As body parts that was single now are molded into one
    Venturing as far inside as the hole may run
    Scratches, moans and screams are flung, as the sound from this scene is song
    As pleasure glands are stimulated an the feeling maximize
    On this night the essence of sex is personified
    As your legs part ways touching every inch of your insides
    As screams and hard but gentle strokes coincide
    Sex
    As motions go from slow to fast the range of positions large and vase
    Never wanting this glimpse of bliss too end or pass
    As breaths you try too catch and grab, inside you my name is sketch and stab
    Sex
    As you ride this experience out like a wave an inside you I play
    Seeing that look of complete and total satisfaction written across your face
    As my tongue touch you with pleasurable grace
    S exual gratification as vase as the stars
    E cstasy made too know this world and within it your venture far
    X, which marks the end and the spot
    So I end this with X as once again the process starts
    Sex




    Submitted on 2007-03-20 13:56:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      WOW! This is a very pationate and heart felt piece. Kee up the good work.
    | Posted on 2007-03-20 00:00:00 | by Depression420 | [ Reply to This ]


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