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    dots Submission Name: Infatuationdots
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    Author: Ghetto_King
    ASL Info:    19 m ft. lauderdale
    Elite Ratio:    0.76 - 4/33/54
    Words: 162
    Class/Type: Misc/Longing
    Total Views: 735
    Average Vote:    4.5000
    Bytes: 1021



    Description:
       when feeling between friends grow


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    From sights eyes too touch, giggles and smiles
    Noticeable flirting and just messing around
    Not loving but becoming in like as time together grows
    Questioning friendship as feelings blooms like that of a rose
    From lasting stares and blank moment of silence
    From noticing small things in each others attributes and becoming excited
    Small things send me there with a lick of the lips or just a sexy smirk or stare
    With all these event infatuation arise like ocean waves
    Finding yourself in mid day just seeing and envisioning her face
    Wanting too speak and spending more time with her the case
    Finding smiles whenever encounters arise with you at the scene
    From friendly flirting too hand holding and kissing the scene
    As her very present brings a smile to face causing dimples too gleam
    Infatuated is a bloom and loving the feel
    As feeling of friendship grow as you try to decipher the real






    Submitted on 2007-03-20 14:57:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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