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Author: Ghetto_King
ASL Info:    19 m ft. lauderdale
Elite Ratio:    0.76 - 4 /33 /54
Words: 162
Class/Type: Misc /Longing
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Average Vote:    4.5000
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when feeling between friends grow


From sights eyes too touch, giggles and smiles
Noticeable flirting and just messing around
Not loving but becoming in like as time together grows
Questioning friendship as feelings blooms like that of a rose
From lasting stares and blank moment of silence
From noticing small things in each others attributes and becoming excited
Small things send me there with a lick of the lips or just a sexy smirk or stare
With all these event infatuation arise like ocean waves
Finding yourself in mid day just seeing and envisioning her face
Wanting too speak and spending more time with her the case
Finding smiles whenever encounters arise with you at the scene
From friendly flirting too hand holding and kissing the scene
As her very present brings a smile to face causing dimples too gleam
Infatuated is a bloom and loving the feel
As feeling of friendship grow as you try to decipher the real

Submitted on 2007-03-20 14:57:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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| Posted on 2007-04-26 00:00:00 | by Chafinky | [ Reply to This ]

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