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    dots Submission Name: Why?dots
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    Author: Orcelandrya
    ASL Info:    18/f/ont
    Elite Ratio:    4.94 - 18/8/9
    Words: 143
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 176
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       my ex andrew started dating a friend of mine i knew andrew was bi before i even got into the relationship i hoped by him meeting my friends and seeing that despite their being open about their sexuality they were still great people he'd come to terms with it all. instead he realized it and lied to my face. as if his immature bitch fit after our break up wasn't bad enough... well andrew you prick this ones to you!


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    why did you feel like i'd laugh
    like i'd just rub it all in your face
    why did you think i'd be cruel
    when your love life isn't my place

    you know its not like me to judge
    i know its not like you to lie
    yet was the one left not knowing
    and all i can wonder is why

    did you honestly think you could hide it
    honestly think i don't see
    i've known him forever so sorry
    theres no secrets between him and me

    next time just know you can trust me
    next time don't feed me lies
    our friendship lays tattered and torn
    the thought of you i've grown to despise

    its funny how one little secret
    can ruin a friendship so fast
    lets hope that this stage of lying
    will fade away and not last




    Submitted on 2007-03-20 15:02:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Very well worded
    You opened up your Heart and put it all on the shelf for Andrew to see and understand
    I know you feel better about yourself after writing this

    I encourage you to try and remain Friends with Andrew
    I have a funny feeling he is going to need all the friends he can get
    You can be the Strong one here and Forgive him for his mistakes
    I Think that gesture alone will show him Truthfully how much you do care about him
    God Bless
    Ron

    Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think
    Thank You
    Ron
    | Posted on 2007-03-20 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      This was written perfectly, I don't have one negitve thing to say about it. I relate to this, my ex lied ot me about his dad being in a car crash and dying in hopes I let him get a little farther... Guys can be pricks, but you'll find one who really loves you and won't lie. This was a fantastic poem. Keep up the amazing work, and I'll keep reading

    Saint Razor
    | Posted on 2007-03-20 00:00:00 | by brknprclndol | [ Reply to This ]



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