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    dots Submission Name: I Wantdots
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    Author: truthbetold
    ASL Info:    20-f
    Elite Ratio:    3.4 - 38/45/33
    Words: 115
    Class/Type: Poetry/I hate you
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    why cant you accept me for the way i am or the way i want to be
    i cant be that perfect child all i can do is just be me

    i wanna rock the house
    i wanna scream and shout
    i want to do the things i wanna do

    i want to go to to different places
    i want to see different faces
    instead you want me to live in this caged home....























    Submitted on 2007-03-20 18:35:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I think you may need a little more detail in this one. but you pulled it off great. love ya,
    <3 black rose
    | Posted on 2007-03-21 00:00:00 | by black rose13 | [ Reply to This ]
      hey, i like this yeah....it is good to do the things ya wanna do. i know how all that feels! yeah...good write, keep writtin!!

    *kate
    | Posted on 2007-03-21 00:00:00 | by koolness | [ Reply to This ]


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