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    dots Submission Name: that i believedots
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    Author: gloomyanddoomy
    ASL Info:    17,female
    Elite Ratio:    1.05 - 81/426/527
    Words: 129
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsthat i believedots
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    your tell me all these things
    that i believe
    like you want to kiss me agian
    like you still love me
    but what about her
    the girl you left me for
    if you want to ill let you
    just give me one more chance
    we can make this right
    there is nothing i wont do
    to get you back with me
    because i cant talk about anything
    besides you
    i cant think of anything
    besides you
    i havent laughed
    the same as i use to
    or smiled as i did
    when i was your girl
    i dont care what people say
    i dont move on
    im not going to let go
    and dont regret
    all the time i spent with you

    Deticated to: Hunter




    Submitted on 2007-03-21 06:56:54     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is sad and yet sweet at the same time. Keep up the good work.
    | Posted on 2007-03-21 00:00:00 | by Depression420 | [ Reply to This ]


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