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    dots Submission Name: Defeat/ Nynaevedots
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    Author: Nynaeve
    ASL Info:    23, female, Israel
    Elite Ratio:    3.13 - 43/65/26
    Words: 45
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
    Total Views: 143
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 329



    Description:
       Math class...so close, yet so far :D


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    dotsDefeat/ Nynaevedots
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    Almost reaching surface,
    Nearly,
    But not quite there.

    Sanity tries to take over,
    Attempting,
    It's yet to ensnare.

    My eyes refuse to be opened
    Blind,
    Is all that I wish.

    Soon the sounds will be broken
    Gone,
    And so will I be.




    Submitted on 2007-03-21 14:44:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I like it.

    Keeping it short was a good choice. And it is a very ambigous poem. Bar your caption I would never have guessed it was inspired by maths class:p

    The structure makes it really easy to follow too.

    Kudos to you.

    ~Keiran~
    | Posted on 2007-03-23 00:00:00 | by Keiran | [ Reply to This ]



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