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    dots Submission Name: I'm Freedots
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    Author: truthbetold
    ASL Info:    20-f
    Elite Ratio:    3.4 - 38/45/33
    Words: 90
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 1166
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 510



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    dotsI'm Freedots
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    i can finally spread my wings and fly
    i won't have to cry these tears i cry
    all the depression i felt went away
    i now have my own words to say
    i dont have to worry about those that bring me down
    those that rip my heart out and throw it on the ground
    i'm free to do what i want to do
    now that i don't have to worry about you
    see it's sad coz we're no longer together
    don't fret i'll be with Jesus now and forever.




    Submitted on 2007-03-21 15:30:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I mean out of many of the poems on this site your the first one to knock me dead.I absoultly loved it.It made me sit down for moment and think.I have no hat but if I did I would tip it to you.
    Thanks for the read.
    Sincerly,
    -the girl who cried wolf to much
    | Posted on 2007-06-09 00:00:00 | by BlueTorcher | [ Reply to This ]
      wow. SPEECHLESS!!!!!!!
    | Posted on 2007-03-23 00:00:00 | by black rose13 | [ Reply to This ]


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