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    dots Submission Name: I guess its lovedots
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    Author: Orcelandrya
    ASL Info:    18/f/ont
    Elite Ratio:    4.94 - 18/8/9
    Words: 104
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 183
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 632



    Description:
       I was put on the spot to write a love poem since i was ranting and raving about feeling like for the first time i'm actually in love so its short a bit forced in the rhyming i know but i like it anyways so here it is. blame katia if you dislike it lol


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    dotsI guess its lovedots
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    I never thought I'd feel this way
    Never thought i'd fall this fast
    But now i know what real love is
    And hope that this will last

    Each kiss still takes my breath away
    Each look still leaves me weak
    My once so dull and boring life
    no longer seems so bleak

    Each touch still gives me butterflies
    You words still make me sigh
    And now i'm glad I took a chance
    Instead of letting you pass by

    I know this time is different
    I know this time its real
    I guess love does exist
    I guess its love I feel




    Submitted on 2007-03-21 17:42:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This was so sweet! I LOVED it!
    ~*~Kristen~*~
    | Posted on 2007-03-29 00:00:00 | by PrincessKrisen | [ Reply to This ]
      Nice poem I like it, very visual and imaginative. I like how it feels like you put your emotions towards the poem and how I felt it and if that is what you were coming across then you did it keep up the good work peace & stay safe...
    | Posted on 2007-03-25 00:00:00 | by Cordell | [ Reply to This ]
      This is a really nice, warm feeling poem.

    Good work,

    Kube.
    | Posted on 2007-03-22 00:00:00 | by Kube | [ Reply to This ]



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