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    dots Submission Name: Of Fearful Minddots
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    Author: Katlord
    ASL Info:    24/no thanks/my room
    Elite Ratio:    2.17 - 375/199/101
    Words: 96
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 757
    Average Vote:    3.0000
    Bytes: 621



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    dotsOf Fearful Minddots
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    There is this place where time stands still.
    A place of bright darkness.
    A place of quiet loudness.
    No one wants to admit theyíve been there.
    But indeed there theyíve been.
    Where is this place?
    I hadnít been.
    You may ask.
    Then you realize this place you hadnít been,
    Was where you were,
    When it all started last.
    As far in the future.
    As back in the past.
    There is this little place where no one,
    And yet everyone has been.
    So let me ask you your question.
    Where is this place?
    You hadnít been?




    Submitted on 2007-03-22 09:51:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      man thats kou!!!! that hurts!!!!
    | Posted on 2007-03-23 00:00:00 | by yamifox | [ Reply to This ]
      The oxymorons were effective, as was the variety of different syntax. Not sure how the speculation relates to fear, unless you're referring to fear of the unknown. The title and poem's subject were unclear. All in all, an enjoyable read.
    | Posted on 2007-03-22 00:00:00 | by Arendil | [ Reply to This ]
      deep yo. u looking tooo deeep.

    good write yo
    | Posted on 2007-03-22 00:00:00 | by darkness | [ Reply to This ]


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