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    dots Submission Name: Fire Storydots
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    Author: Katlord
    ASL Info:    24/no thanks/my room
    Elite Ratio:    2.17 - 375/199/101
    Words: 87
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 756
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 546



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    dotsFire Storydots
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    Let it dance.
    Listen to its roar.
    See its bright flame.
    Feel the comforting warmth.

    You can live.
    You can die.
    Within or around it.

    There is a lesson to be learned.
    You must learn to not be burned.
    By both fire and passion.

    Painful things these can be.
    They can also be the most beautiful ever seen.

    They run from no one.
    They donít hide in shame.
    So believe in yourself.
    And make your own flame.




    Submitted on 2007-03-22 09:54:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      u seem to be saying conflicting things ...
    one hand u said to avoid flame and passion as it burns
    on the other hand u ask the reader to make their own flame...
    kinda feeling confused on what u want to convey ....
    | Posted on 2007-03-22 00:00:00 | by jagruti_shah | [ Reply to This ]


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