"To there destination"
I can't really tell if that was supposed to be "their" or not. Otherwise,
This poem was written marvelously. It keeps your attention and guides you to the end. It paints a beautiful picture and conveys just the right feels as it carries you out of some peaceful little meadow somewhere and into that last line.
that's probably my favorite part. I'm not sure why. It probably has to do with the word pepper being used in that context or something.
This was really great, and I give you a lot of credit for being original. A lot of times in love poetry, that's very difficult.