Folds of Skin by Twice

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Submission Name: Folds of Skin dots

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Author:	Twice
Elite Ratio:	4 - 71/82/52
Words:	41

Class/Type:	Poetry/Serious
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Folds of Skin dots

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She holds my wallet
whats left of me
folded leather
plastic pictures
used up cocaine baggies
and expired condoms.
Fortune cookie advice
and cash that's been melting like ice.
She holds my secrets,
I blush even in death

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